Showing posts with label praise poem. Show all posts
Showing posts with label praise poem. Show all posts

Saturday, February 27, 2021

Praise Poem for Elliot Page

 PRAISE

            Elliot Page

  for making so many

        movie pictures

     from inside a closet —


his little hands & feet,

             wrists & ankles

splicing scenes between

               the slats

of the accordion doors —


hundreds of frames

             serving as visors

into any # of parallel 

              universes


In scene 3, take 7

he is pregnant

he has a super useless power

he rides a pink bicycle

he plays a white violin


*Snap*  he’s grown from

                     girl to man

in a ghost town, a trailer park,

    a post-apocalyptic past &

a now that still doesn’t quite

                     understand.


12-3-20





Comments and critique welcome

Monday, February 22, 2021

Unrecognizable Octopus!!!

 FRIENDS,


In the Spring of 2020 I decided to write a series of Praise Poems that might possibly grow into a chapbook. It’s not the most original idea, but I wanted to celebrate small conquests in a quarantined existence. The original goal was to write one a day, but I fell quite short of that. That’s okay, because I still wrote way more than any chapbook could contain. I’m in the process of sorting the good from the bad, and as I do, I’ve found a few that are not quite publishable, but which I don’t mind sharing here in the Octo Diary. I welcome any commentary or critique anyone wants to offer.


This first one is about everyone’s favorite barstool poet, Rupi Kaur….





PRAISE Rupi 

Perched on the lip of her barstool

Like a vulture upon a gargoyle

Atop the tallest bank-owned tower

In Edgeville


She perches defiantly, serenely,

Then does a little swivel, twisting the

Barstool’s head toward the clouds &

Off she flies,


Or raptures, making the slightest sound,

A tap gurgling its last breath of ale

Few can even detect it

Let alone cum from its rarefied

Hush


She opens her folded hand to blow

A kiss & shows a tiny word

Written in bold 50 pt type —

             ‘SO


She swandives from the edge

Of the sky & into the depths

Of herself


6-1-20